Part 3 (feel free to see Part 2 and Part 1)
The final piece with director/instructor’s remarks. I addressed these in my final piece. I did a lot of small tweaks and readjusting of content from viewing the comps I made prior.
I made a conscious effort to subtly tweak the line-spacing so that the paper folds went between the sentences. A small but powerful difference it makes. Looking at the paragraphs as blocks, I enjoyed reflecting the picture’s opening passage of Paradise Lost with the final passage of the content.